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PostSubject: Tetsaimon Suchiru   Sun Feb 07, 2016 7:17 am





Name: Tetsaimon
Nickname: Tetsa, The Black Steel Seraph 'Seraph'
Age: 19
Gender: Male

Height: 6'8
Weight: 220 lbs
Appearance: Let us start with his eyes, the color of which are a striking grey with the faintest hint of blue. As beautiful as they are foreboding. Somehow his gaze is not gentle though, it is powerful. He knows when the time comes his clan will be upon his shoulders and has developed suit. Tetsa's body is likewise strong following in the natural build of his clan. Chowagakure's harvest has helped him to put on the pounds that being on the run stole away. He is built like a fighter, every ounce of muscle has use to spur him forward in a battle and see his goals met. To most the young Suchiru would appear dangerous. The land of Sunlight being a place of warmth he wears little more than a bandage covering on his torso and black baggy gi pants with traditional footwear. The bandages certainly add a curiosity to his form, but they tend to cover the encroaching 'tattoos' that prolonged use of the Steel Release bring. The black lines often swirling patterns, are places on his body where the release is easiest to manifest. They generally appear from over use of the release in formative years suggesting he shouldn't have any more of the tattoos appearing. All the same he tries to keep them bandaged.

And his hair is rather grown out out of preference... A guy can like how he looks, right? Add to this a flowing black robe, open at the chest and he may appear quite the powerful person.

Village: Chowagakure
Character Rank: Academy Student (Special?)
Clan: Suchiru
Element: Steel Release

Personality: Testa is one attempting to open up to the world though traditionally quite in the common places. He tends to only speak up when it is pertinent rather than to spark conversation. His life has been one of action and he prefers it to idle chatter. Despite what one might expect he is rather reflective over being stubborn, analytical may be a proper word. He is one to examine himself and be his harshest critic. The man used to be more boisterous and lively but war changes men. Tetsa is reluctant to show himself to the world for fear of losing everything and everyone again. It is his greatest fear and his greatest weapon, the weight of his people is upon him, the fear of loss, and the fire to be better than his parents had been. To be more than another arrogant attempt at reaching for the status of the sage. His goal is to be as Haruto is the peacemaker, the one willing to do whatever it takes. As such the kage is a personal hero of Tetsaimon's for his accomplishments and inner strengths. To be that man's student would be the greatest gift.
Character History: His clan has been a very recent addition to Chowagakure. The young man effectively missed out on his academy years for the full training that his family could offer to those that were exceptionally talented in the use of the Steel Release. As such he was immersed in a world of war from a young age though his disposition didn't always reflect it

The Suchiru Clan was ever a large force on the attack. The belief that they were the body of the Sage of the Six paths gave them power. It gave them power in the form of pride and personal value. Each of them felt they were a part of a greater force that they were destined to be the greatest ninja in the lands. When Tetsa was born he knew nothing else but these thoughts and the immense pride he had in his people was barely outweighed by a generous and generally lazy nature. Both of which would change with the harsh training and reality of their life.

Tetsaimon was raised on the fly almost his clan ever roaming, ever fighting in foreign lands. They had the durability to break through opposing forces but the advantages were never permanent. Nor could they stand being out-numbered at every turn while the rest of the clans formed up. His early life was one of savage warfare and conquest, the Suchiru were synonymous with carnage and supremacy. It bred a monstrous force given their innate strengths, but it wittled down the once enormous clan into a weaker power.

So while he grew up, Tetsa watched family slowly fall away. No burials could be given, no respects paid as a Suchiru body or several dozen could be found on two of the three lands. By the time Tetsa was thirteen he was on his own team with an elder sister and a woman he had come to grow deeply for. The young nin was a glutton for punishment, more eager to distract the enemy and attract their jutsu than risk his other teammates to them. It only took one mission for them to not take the bait though, and one horrific loss after another for a realization to sink in. Even his people couldn't stand alone. The young man found himself and his sister grievously wounded in their endaevor. The woman withstood enough to see Tetsa and the younger girl to relative safety the two soon were separated and Tetsa found himself alone and stumbling to his family's forward camps. The reality of war was that it wasn't something they could keep fighting, not alone. As such they would start running and in running the stragglers would fall by the way side.

But warriors grow tired of flight after a while. They had made enemies that tracked them down... It brought about a last stand of sorts. Those men and women below the age of twenty were sent to get the children and elderly to the land of Sunlight. It was a fair portion of the clan, but also the portion that was youthful and hot blooded. Tetsaimon's parents were thought to have been killed in the last stand of his people as well as well over half the remaining clan. Tetsa found himself among those in flight leading his people to the burgeoning village of Chowagakure.

At the behest of his elders they turned away from the warrior past. Having lost enough they instead turned to using their strengths to aid in the harvest. Tools were made, friendships found, and acceptance into the village acquired. Tetsa's strength saw the elders look to him and make an example of his placement. The laziness of youth was long gone and replaced by a desire to aid what remained of his clan. He had intended to enter the academy as soon as possible but was forced to wait nearly two years to see the Suchiru fortress in the land of Sunlight completed. (On the edge of Chowagakure itself) At nineteen he was finishing up a crash course in the academy though his gaze was enough for the teachers to know he had seen more war than most of them. Being among groups of children has made him a known quantity in the village.

More striking has been his activities in training against the village's chunin and jounin on occasion. While many in his clan are fast growing accustomed to their home (of two years). Tetsa is still struggling with making friends though he knows of many and many seem to know of him. In the sparring fields he has become known as the Black Steel Seraph. The reason being something akin to the ninja being angels under the sun, and the seraph being warrior angels... Him using the steel release and the manifestation as black steel. Really he's just trying to get it to stick. Perhaps the Seraphs would become the Sannin of his new home?

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PostSubject: Re: Tetsaimon Suchiru   Sun Feb 07, 2016 9:30 pm

Looks good, but the clan had been placed in Yamigakure. BUUUUT seeing as it is your clan, just going to change it over if this is where you want it to be. Will approve after confirmation of this.

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PostSubject: Re: Tetsaimon Suchiru   Sun Feb 07, 2016 9:31 pm

The clan needs a rewrite for the new lore as it stands.
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PostSubject: Re: Tetsaimon Suchiru   Sun Feb 07, 2016 9:33 pm

That's fine, Your char is approved, the clan will be edited to match current lore.


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