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 In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)

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PostSubject: In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)   Thu Feb 11, 2016 2:19 am

Laputa was brought up in a dying portion of the Main Branch family. From birth, her Byakugan was coveted by many who would abuse them, so her parents hid her away for ages, only allowing her to go to the Academy after she begged and begged. She wanted to help people, she said, and the only way of doing that is by learning chakra control and Medical Ninjutsu. They finally relented, allowing their only daughter to go to the Academy when she was eight. While she was there she was put into the Special Advanced class, one she shared with two other shinobi in the Village currently. One was supremely popular, and the other was overly talented. She couldn't hope to compete with either when it came to combat, so she worked on her Medical Ninjutsu under a helpful teacher named Miss Nala. Eventually, she came to have a crush on her instructor, which was frowned upon by her family. Squelching her own feelings almost immediately following a "talk" with her parents, she continued on through until she was about 10 when she finally passed her test. After a short while with the standard Genin squad configuration, she was placed into the Chuunin Exams.

When they were let loose in the forest, she immediately sought after the scrolls, only to run into a pair of older boys who obviously wanted some. Being only 13 at the time, she had an idea of what they wanted but was unwilling to give herself to them. The moment they set themselves upon her, tearing her clothes, they were caught with their pants down, literally. Blood spraying from their throats, a blue silk blanket was thrown over her form. As her savior walked away, she caught a glimpse of a night-black ponytail and a red Chowagakure headband. She was saved, and the scrolls the two boys had dropped were both what she needed to complete the exam.

Fast forward several years. She had passed the Chuunin Exams splendidly, and she was now sixteen years old. Searching for a love that was lost, she had sewn the blue silk blanket into the dress that she wears constantly. She went through several boys and even more girls trying to find THE ONE, the person who had rescued her, but it was to no avail. That hair color was rare, especially in that length, so who could it have been? Not bothering with it for the moment, she set to her work with a fiery passion. Her Byakugan assisted her in seeing the flow of chakra through a person, allowing her to better apply her Medical techniques and herbal remedies. She believed in those, despite the effectiveness of Medical Ninjutsu, as she believed that they could save your life even if you were out of chakra. Unfortunately, her mind wanders in her field, causing her to perform unorthodox procedures that, somehow, work beyond all hope. This is the only thing that keeps her from getting in trouble with the Kage, given her track record of these bizarre procedures. Who knew a face transplant would work?! Despite this, she still had time for her family, who were growing older with each coming year. They were middle-aged when they had her, and now they were easily in their sixties. It was while she was visiting that they closed their eyes for the last time, age having outdone them. Crying for them, she buried them with their forefathers, making sure their eyes were destroyed in case someone decided to try and take them. After all, Byakugan users from the Main Line didn't have the curse mark that prevented that. Laputa vowed right then to uphold what she promised them; that she would bring a change to the Shinobi World, no matter the cost.



Okami hardly heard the words spoken at the funeral. Dressed in the black of mourning, he would look up as the rain began, and the tears of those who had known her flowed freely. The one light in his life was dead, her last gift to him being these accursed eyes, those heavenly eyes that see the truth of all Creation without obstruction. Walking up to her casket before she was buried, he cried, genuinely. Of all the people he knew, he had only dared become close to Laputa, and in the end she had been killed because of him. He swore, then and there, that he would become stronger and end the corruption of this world, no matter the cost. If he needed to, he would become God. Once he did, he would punish the wicked. First, however, he would learn to control his new eyes, and the protecting god of all Uchiha.
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PostSubject: Re: In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)   Thu Feb 11, 2016 2:50 am

The next morning, Okami woke crying to a cold spot on the bed next to him. The previous day had been Hell for him. Not only did the love of his life die in front of his eyes and had her funeral yesterday, but he had learned she had been with child. She had meant to tell him that day, or so her friend had said, but she was so vibrant and full of life. To learn of this had sent Okami over the edge, causing him to lay on the ground crippled, unable to continue. The only thing that kept him going this morning was his will to make a world that she would have approved of.

Taking a hot shower and brushing his teeth, having breakfast and taking care of the hair that hung down to his ass, all of it was dull and dreary after having lost her. Getting dressed in his normal clothing, he walked out the door and to the training yard, one specifically for Uchiha that was held within the compound. One of his old friends called him over. Fubuki was excited, as he had recently awakened his Sharingan and was showing off to everyone. Okami had kept quiet, as all anyone knew was that he hadn't unlocked it. The truth was much more severe than that. He had achieved not only the fully-matured third tomoe in his Sharingan, he was the only wielder of the Mangekyo Sharingan currently in the clan.

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PostSubject: Re: In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)   Thu Feb 11, 2016 2:21 pm

Okami was on his way over to train when a hand tapped at his shoulder. Looking over it, he noted that Luke was there, asking him what was wrong. It took him a moment to register what he was saying, but once he did it was fairly easy to answer. "Laputa...she was murdered in our home."

Luke would know exactly who Laputa was, as she had been in their Special Advanced class in the Academy, and had always worked harder than they did. Back then, they were different, Luke being extremely popular and Okami being the top of their class. Laputa had changed him considerably for the better, giving him something to live for, and someone to protect. With her gone, Okami was unpredictable, and would likely turn to the infamous Curse of Hatred that enveloped his family.

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PostSubject: Re: In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)   Thu Feb 11, 2016 3:23 pm

Following Luke to the training field, Okami would be silent the entire walk. When Luke pulled out the Fuuinjutsu scrolls, Okami noticed that they were fairly trivial, but he wouldn't say anything. The other Shinobi suggested that he try to seal Okami's jutsu, he merely shrugged and made a few hand seals, ending in Tiger. Breathing in a breath of air and exhaling, he used the Great Fireball technique first, something simple that almost any Uchiha could do. If Luke couldn't seal that, then he was hopelessly outclassed by even the youngest of Okami's clan. Once this was done, Okami would begin to do something else before stopping, backing up a few steps. When Luke looked up, he would see a change come over his best friend. His eyes would turn a bright crimson, as if he had activated his Sharingan, but the design was all wrong. Instead of the distinctive tomoe, there would be a black triquetra pattern in the center of his eye.

After his eyes went through this odd change, a blood-red chakra would begin to emit itself from around him. A skeletal arm would emerge from said chakra, clawing it's way into existence. Once this was done, it would extend and backhand Luke across the training field. Walking forward, Okami would let the hand retract and reabsorb itself into the chakra surrounding him. Looking at Luke with those eyes of his, Okami would begin to speak. "Luke, you cannot begin to understand my pain right now....She was pregnant. The love of my life is gone, and with her went our legacy."

With that, Okami's eyes returned to normal and the chakra let itself dissipate into the wind. He dropped to his knees, silent except for the tears. They fell in streams, silent sobs accentuating each drop as they fell. "Do you understand now? If I just let it go and move on, I'd be no better than the men who killed her. Luke, you don't realize what these eyes mean. The Mangekyo Sharingan can only be achieved through the grief that comes along with the death of a loved one. It is so powerful that it forces the user to go blind eventually. It was her last gift to me..."

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PostSubject: Re: In Memoriam (Private, Jutsu Training)   Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:17 pm

"Fair enough. Now, let's try Ash Pile Burning." Okami would say with a sigh, wiping the tears from his face and blinking. Forming Snake Rat, Snake, then Tiger seals, he would breath outward, exhaling gunpowder before clicking a piece of flint he had put in his teeth. As it exploded, he would expect Luke to seal it just then, to make the most of the effort it would exert upon him. Backing up a little further, he would warn Luke before unleashing an A-Rank Technique, Great Fire Annihilation. The flames would expand over 50 meters, and extend over 30 meters out. Honestly, he was running out of chakra fast, and needed something to eat.

"Hey, Luke, I'm running out of chakra. Why don't we go grab a bite to eat?"

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