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Name: Senbi Suiiki no Kouchaku 船尾水域の膠着 (Stern Waters Stalemate)
Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu
Descriptor:
    Water Path Samurai are all about their calm, their particular elegance.  When activated, Stern Waters Stalemate looks the most inactive of all the charged skills.  The Water Samurai simply stands in a calm rest with no real focus or worry.  Upon taking an attack from an attacker, the samurai vanishes and appears behind their target, having already used the Iai.  A giant wave of chakra seeming to engulf them in a flurry a second later.

Requirements:
Iaido
Sabre Technique
Rupture or Shockwave Slash
Counter
Surging Crash
Reflecting Tempest
Snowstorm Beheading


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Arkane wrote:
Name: Senbi Suiiki no Kouchaku 船尾水域の膠着 (Stern Waters Stalemate)
Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu
Descriptor:
    Water Path Samurai are all about their calm, their particular elegance.  When activated, Stern Waters Stalemate looks the most confusing of all the charged skills.  The Water Samurai simply stands in a calm rest with no real focus or worry.  A second later a rapid tide of attacks strike over and over at any opponents near the Water Samurai, looking like a stream of rushing crashing waves that extend from the feet of the Water Samurai to anywhere in a 50m range, dealing more damage the more time the waves have to gain momentum.  The waves last three turns before vanishing.

Requirements:
Iaido
Sabre Technique
Rupture or Shockwave Slash
Counter
Surging Crash
Reflecting Tempest
Snowstorm Beheading

For clarity: We aren't against how this works mechanically, that being essentially a 50m radius flurry of strikes for 3 turns with the cost of your character being unable to do anything else during that time.

Our issue is that your character can't actually be still during this time, because your sword isn't actually 50m long. Our suggestion is: Rather than being still, your character lashes out 50 meters, returns to the same spot, and lashes out again ultra-rapidly, each time returning to the epicenter and leaving the illusion that they are standing motionless.
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Its a counterattack. They attack at you, you anime appear behind them slashing. I can probably word it better

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Arkane wrote:
Name: Senbi Suiiki no Kouchaku 船尾水域の膠着 (Stern Waters Stalemate)
Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu
Descriptor:
    Water Path Samurai are all about their calm, their particular elegance.  When activated, Stern Waters Stalemate looks the most inactive of all the charged skills.  The Water Samurai simply stands in a calm rest with no real focus or worry.  Upon taking an attack from an attacker, the samurai vanishes and appears behind their target, having already used the Iai.  A giant wave of chakra seeming to engulf them in a flurry a second later.

Requirements:
Iaido
Sabre Technique
Rupture or Shockwave Slash
Counter
Surging Crash
Reflecting Tempest
Snowstorm Beheading
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