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PostSubject: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 4:21 am

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Name: chinmaku or sengentsu hyuga
NickName:Sabaku no Kufuku or shunshin no sengentsu
Age:18
Gender:Male
Height:6,1
Weight:101kg

Appearance
Chinmaku is a tall lanky kid with compact muscles and smooth skin.
His skin is has a light honey color to it and seems to glow.He is quite handsome with a small nose and ears that seems to match his body. All of this makes him look small and pure even though he is quite tall.His byakugan is ocean blue and makes people feel as if he is looking into their soul.He has short brown hair which is white in the back but nobody knows since its always covered up.He has black fingerless gloves which have poaches on them which hold senbons.He wears white robs with gold lines and markings.His shoes also match his robes plus they look like cool.One his back he carries a four feet long sword he calls Jinsokuna karitoriki.(will apply for weapon creation once character approved).Without his robes on he has markings on his skin that were acquired during the changing of the ownership of the body.He wears golden bracelets that currently have no value whatsoever.On his back is a huge scar that he acquired from training.

Rank:genin
Village:Sheisigakure
Clan:Hyuuga
Element:Wind

Personalty

Chinmaku is generally very quite and observant, his emotional receptors were damaged so he has little to no feelings.However when he does feel an emotion it is amplified twenty fold.He likes to read and train and is generally really chill.He eats anything that edible and a lot of things that are not.He however has a little bit of the craziness because of the bijuu chakra within him and this is usually seen in battles when he is truly challenged.Chinmaku has never been angry or felt love for anyone so he is generally clueless as to how people feel.He is very secretive and is great at manipulating other people.He is a master at human phycology.


Character history
Chinmaku was born from the chakra of the one tailed beast ,the ten tails and the body of a young hyuga chuunin,sengenstu.He was born on the day of an eclipse.Sengentsu had been on a mission assigned to him by the kage of the village of gems to investigate the cave that had recently appeared.This cave was not viewed as a threat so he came alone.Upon entering the cave he was sealed and had no choice but to continue.He arrived at the place the chakra of the tailed beast had been.Said chakra had gained minor sentience.It then rushed in to sengntsus body and began to take over his body.The chakra rampaged through his body greatly weakening his body and causing him great pain.After hours of him screaming the being known as chinmaku was born.Having the memories of the previous owner of the body sengentsu infiltrated the village.He has slowly fallen into a routine of taking C and D rank missions.That however changed the day black flames covered the sun.The sheer impossibility and craziness of this made him realize how weak he is.This has motivated him to become the most powerful ninja ever.After that day Chinmaku has had an obsession with strength and will never be quenched.

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PostSubject: Re: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 6:57 am

Alright so there are a few issues here, the most prominent being that you didnt use the template that we have for a character application.


Next, we do not use the traditional Bijuu here, as such, we do not have Shukaku as the one tail. So, there is no sand release.

I would ask that you use the actual template, and read a few of our systems and the bijuu list.

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PostSubject: Re: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 7:20 am

Where are the templates then.

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PostSubject: Re: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 12:28 pm

Lol you are getting there. We are currently only allowing Genin level at the start though.

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PostSubject: Re: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 12:32 pm

All done thanks

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PostSubject: Re: Sabaku no kūfuku(complete)   Wed Feb 08, 2017 12:34 pm

Approved!
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