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PostSubject: Smoke Release Jutsu   Tue Feb 14, 2017 9:52 pm

Name: Smoke Release: Smoke Bomb
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
The user spews a medium sized thick cloud of smoke from their mouth shielding them from their opponents view allowing them to both escape from a dangerous situation and attack without revealing their position. Although the use themselves has full visibility within the smoke.
Requirements: Smoke Release


Name: Smoke Release: Liquid Trap
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
The user gathers a thick volume of liquid smoke on both of their hands and arms. The user would then fire the liquid smoke at their opponent in an attempt to strike them with ample force and allow the user to activate a follow up jutsu. The liquid its self has 40 Strength.
Requirements: Smoke Release


Name: Smoke Release: White Shackles
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
This jutsu is used as a follow up technique of Liquid Trap. The user after covering their target in the Liquid Smoke, manipulate the mass and form of the liquid version into become a solid, therefore freezing their opponents movements making it very difficult to move or use their strength. Target loses 20 Strength and Speed while the smoke is covering them lasts two posts and has a three post cooldown time. Although this smokey attack has a durability of 50.  (Does not restrict the ability for targets/opponents to use ninjutsu/genjutsu/taijutsu.)
Requirements: Requires the use of Liquid Trap and Smoke Release.


Name: Smoke Release: Drifting Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description:
The user turns their entire body into a smokey and gaseous form, in this form the user can travel at faster speeds and seemingly fly or glide.+30 Speed  Also while in this form the user is completely invulnerable to almost all Taijutsu or Physical Attacks but in exchange cannot attack themselves. An addition D Rank chakra per post is needed to keep the form of the gaseous state together. Users are highly vulnerable to Wind Release jutsu while in this state. (Can last for up to three posts but has a five post cooldown.)
Requirements:


Name: Smoke Release: Solid Armor
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description:
The user covers their body head to toe in a thick layer of Solid Smoke, in which boosts both their strength and durability exponentially. (+50 Strength and Durability) In exchange the user becomes slightly slower (-25 Speed.)
Requirements:


Name: Smoke Release: Solid Prison
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Mid
Description:
The user surrounds both them-self and their opponent in a giant rectangle of Solid Smoke, the rectangle itself is 25 meters wide, and 50 meters long. (About the size of half a Football Field.) This jutsu is intended to trap an opponent in a area in which the user can use an additional combining jutsu to fight. This could also be used to trap weaker opponents. However there is also no lid within the rectangle so an opponent themselves is also trapped within the jutsu while it is active. The prision forms at a speed of 110. (150 Durability)
Requirements: Smoke Release



Name: Smoke Release: Draining Hell
Rank: SS
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Mid
Description:
After activating Smoke Release: Solid Prison, the user spews a rather toxic thin layer of smoke inside of the rectangular prison that slowly over time drains an opponent's strength and possibly kill them if exposed for long amounts of time. This form of smoke cannot be manipulated or controlled so it is best to use in a confined space. (The target while stuck in a confined area and inhaling the smoke stats are constantly drained by 15 points for each post in contact with the gas. After 5 posts target becomes unconscious and by 7 posts dies.) In the event a target escapes from the gas the effects with still linger for two posts.


Requirements: Requires the user to activate Solid Prison or be in a confined space, like a room or inside a building. Also requires the user to know White Shackles.
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PostSubject: Re: Smoke Release Jutsu   Tue Feb 14, 2017 10:20 pm

Kenshi wrote:
Name: Smoke Release: Smoke Bomb
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
The user spews a medium sized thick cloud of smoke from their mouth shielding them from their opponents view allowing them to both escape from a dangerous situation and attack without revealing their position.
Requirements: Smoke Release
Should probably also mention that the user is also unable to see, or that he can see within the smoke.

Name: Smoke Release: Liquid Trap
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
The user gathers a thick volume of liquid smoke on both of their hands and arms. The user would then fire the liquid smoke at their opponent in an attempt to strike them with ample force and allow the user to activate a follow up jutsu.
Requirements: Smoke Release
Give me a strength stat for the "ample force"

Name: Smoke Release: White Shackles
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close-Mid
Description:
This jutsu is used as a follow up technique of Liquid Trap, the user after covering their target in the Liquid Smoke, manipulate the mass and for of the liquid version into become a solid, therefore freezing their opponents movements making it very difficult to move or user their strength. Target loses 20 Strength and Speed while the smoke is covering them lasts two posts and has a three post cooldown time.  (Does not restrict the ability for targets/opponents to use ninjutsu/genjutsu/taijutsu.)
Requirements: Requires the use of Liquid Trap and Smoke Release.
Looks great! Just needs a durability stat

Name: Smoke Release: Drifting Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description:
The user turns their entire body into a smokey and gaseous form, in this form the user can travel at faster speeds and seemingly fly or glide.+30 Speed  Also while in this form the user is completely invulnerable to almost all Taijutsu or Physical Attacks. (Can last for up to three posts but has a five post cooldown.)
Requirements:
I feel like there would be a weakness in that one might be blown away by a wind jutsu. lol
You might want to add something about how you keep from getting your gas separated. And add that you cant attack in that form


Name: Smoke Release: Solid Armor
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description:
The user covers their body head to toe in a thick layer of Solid Smoke, in which boosts both their strength and durability exponentially. (+50 Strength and Durability) In exchange the user becomes slightly slower (-25 Speed.)
Requirements:
Approved.

Name: Smoke Release: Solid Prison
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range:Mid
Description:
The user surrounds both themself and their opponent in a giant rectangle of Solid Smoke, the rectangle itself is 25 meters wide, and 50 meters long. (About the size of half a Football Field.) This jutsu is intended to trap an opponent in a area in which the user can use an additional combining jutsu to fight. This could also be used to trap weaker opponents. (150 Durability)
Requirements: Smoke Release
I'm assuming there's a lid? also, how fast does it appear?


Name: Smoke Release: Draining Hell
Rank: SS
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Mid
Description:
After activating Smoke Release: Solid Prison, the user spews a rather toxic thin layer of smoke inside of the rectangular prison that slowly over time drains an opponent's strength and possibly kill them if exposed for long amounts of time. This form of smoke cannot be manipulated or controlled so it is best to use in a confined space. In addition this smoke boosts the rank and strength of all smoke jutsu by 1 rank/20 Stats. (The target while stuck in a confined area and inhaling the smoke stats are constantly drained by 10 points for each post in contact with the gas. After 5 posts target becomes unconscious and by 7 posts dies.) In the event a target escapes from the gase the effects with still linger for two posts.


Requirements: Requires the user to activate Solid Prison or be in a confined space, like a room or inside a building. Also requires the user to know White Shackles.

Ok, it seems fine, but I personally am against a jutsu increasing the potency of other jutsu. While in this instance it makes some sense, im just not a fan of that aspect.

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PostSubject: Re: Smoke Release Jutsu   Tue Feb 14, 2017 10:45 pm

fixed and modified
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PostSubject: Re: Smoke Release Jutsu   Wed Feb 15, 2017 6:34 am

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