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PostSubject: The Erasure of Iaido   Wed Apr 12, 2017 5:54 pm

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Name: Aura
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1ft
Description: This technique stems from the amount of willpower people put into their blows, Xayah has learned to harness this willpower and translate it into a sort of an invisible physical aura which allows her to extend the range of her Taijutsu and Bukijutsu by 1 foot. Meaning if the blow seems like it didn't connect due to the opponent narrowly dodging it the blow will still hit them albeit with half that of the original damage simply due to the physical aura which envelops them in battle. This makes engaging in a physical battle with Xayah a very high risk for amateurs in close ranged combat.
Requirements: -

Name: Focused Aura
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Varies
Description: Xayah has focused her Aura, limiting it to only affecting her when she is utilizing Bukijutsu, more specifically the practice of sword based combat known as Kenjutsu, due to this it has become more potent and her Aura will doubled in size when it is being used in conjunction with a sword-based Bukijutsu attack, normal size when it is dealing with a Aura-based technique and being completely non-existent when used with Taijutsu or any other technique that is not based around sword play or the Aura itself.
Requirements: Aura

Name: Enhanced Aura
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 5ft
Description: This technique stems from the amount of willpower people put into their blows, Xayah having learned to harness this willpower and translate it into a sort of an invisible physical aura which allows her to extend the range of her Taijutsu and Kenjutsu by 5 feet. Meaning if the blow seems like it didn't connect due to the opponent narrowly dodging it the blow will still hit them albeit with half that of the original damage simply due to the physical aura which envelops them in battle. This makes engaging in a physical battle with Xayah a very high risk for amateurs in close ranged combat.
Requirements: Aura

Name: Aural Focus
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self (Sword)
Description: This technique was developed as a result of surviving a clash with a particularly powerful opponent. Xayah observed her opponent compressing their Wind Release chakra nature to a single point and thought to refine and create her own method of doing so. Xayah learned to compress her Aura around her sword granting the edged weapon an increased resistance to damage while this technique is being used at the cost of no other Aura techniques being able to be utilized while this technique is active (+1 tier to the weapon). When this technique is used in conjunction with Aural Rage, the sword deals additional damage. Likewise the blade turns copper-red as a result of the change to Xayah's own aura.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Wed Apr 12, 2017 6:10 pm

Aura, Focused Aura, and Enhanced Aura are good to go.

Aural Focus looks good as well, although weapons don't necessarily have their own durability in a number sense like ninja, its more of an honor code around here or common sense. So instead of boosting it by 15 I would suggest raising the durability by a tier. So if you have a A Rank Weapon it would become as Durable as an S Rank Weapon.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Fri Apr 14, 2017 4:47 pm

Suggested edit made ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Fri Apr 14, 2017 5:19 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:14 pm

Name: Chakra Signature Supression
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: Chakra is a tool, and like all tools it has a time to be used and a time to be sheathed, because of that Xayah has learned to sheath away her chakra lowering it to the bare minimum she needs to live and erasing her chakra signature at the cost of being unable to use chakra for any Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, or any of their subsets until the topic ends. This technique can be activated at any time however once done the user is unable to un-activate it and it doesn't cost anything to maintain. When Xayah's chakra signature is erased she seems to be like a simple civilian with barely any chakra being able to be seen from her and those with chakra sensory are unable to pick her out in combat due to the low amount of chakra visible, however chakra sensory specifically geared to seeing suppressed chakra levels are able to locate her.
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Name: Lack of Intent
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Description: Xayah's Kenjutsu is deadly not because she uses Iaido effectively but because she has no wasted movement nor indication that she is going to attack before she does. This is something cultivated through practice to eliminate any sign of muscle tension as well as traces of killing intent and is a specific counter to those who utilize dojutsu which slow down objects as their "prediction" becomes useless when faced with spontaneous movement. The usage of this technique makes it so that those she fights are only able to track her movements and detect her attacks if her speed is +10 above their own, or less. If her speed is +20 above their own, she is simply seen as a blur. Anything above that and she is unable to be tracked at all.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Fri Apr 14, 2017 6:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Fri Apr 14, 2017 7:11 pm

Note: I would like to add in that all the techniques I have registered so far must be taught by Xayah in order to be learned.

Name: The Erasure of Iaido
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Range: -
Description: The Erasure of Iaido Kenjutsu fighting style is based on countering sensory abilities while the user is utilizing Iaido along with Chakra Suppression, Lack of Intent, and Focused Aura. It revolves around a mastery of swordsmanship and the reading of movements to allow the user to mask their own movements based on the principles of these sensory types rendering them as well as their strikes "invisible". This concept can be used repeatedly and has 8 paths each dealing with a different branch of sensory. These Paths are Displacement, Seismic, Echo, Olfactory, Ocular, Nervous, Living, Mental each corresponding to a specific sense in question.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Sun Apr 16, 2017 6:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Sun Apr 16, 2017 6:19 pm

All of these techniques need to be at the very least A Rank. The Living Path and Mental Path certainly needs to S Rank. All need some form of post limit as well as a cool down.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Sun Apr 16, 2017 6:31 pm

I believe there is a bit of a misunderstanding with these techniques. They are simply gateways into their respective paths and have no effect other than to enable Xayah to use said path. I was gonna register the actual techniques for the paths after these were approved.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Sun Apr 16, 2017 6:38 pm

Oh well you good to go the. They still wouldnt be C Rank techniques though.
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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Sun Apr 16, 2017 7:24 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Erasure of Iaido   Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:31 pm

Alright, so, first off, I'd like to know how thiis works before I do much else. How does a style of Kenjutsu, a physical art, mute out senses? How does suppressing your killing intent avoid the bonuses given to another by the Sharingan, because no other Doujutsu enhances sight like that? I'm going to need some explanation before I continue.

Also, the Final Path thing? I'm gonna have to say denied. From what I see, it's got way too much stuff going on for one jutsu, AND kills automatically. If it was just the former, I'd ask you to separate it, but as it stands nothing here is a guaranteed kill. Sorry, it's just not happening.


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