Mika Genin
Posts : 215 Join date : 2022-05-11
| Subject: Gentle Admonishment Thu May 19, 2022 11:28 pm | |
| Name: Gentle Admonishment Rank: C Type: Traditional Taijutsu Element: na Description: A sudden strike to the face. If hit, it breaks concentration for techniques currently being maintained through the simple application of a sudden unbalancing strike. -2 technique strength. Jutsu currently being maintained by the enemy are instantly ceased and cannot be reactivated for two posts. This technique does not gain this effect against Ninja whose Durability exceeds this jutsu's rank Requirements: Mika Nymphalidae
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Shojin Special Jounin
Posts : 488 Join date : 2020-09-27
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| Subject: Re: Gentle Admonishment Tue May 24, 2022 3:17 pm | |
| - Mika wrote:
- Name: Gentle Admonishment
Rank: C Type: Traditional Taijutsu Element: na Description: A sudden strike to the face, breaks concentration for using or maintaining Techniques through the simple application of a sudden unbalancing strike, -2 technique strength, Enemy cannot use or maintain Jutsu for 2 posts. Requirements: Mika Nymphalidae Some issues here
- You need a resistance criteria. Something like; "This technique does not gain this effect against Ninja whose Durability exceeds this jutsu's rank (not power)."
- Completely removing access to jutsu is going to be a no-go. What you can do instead, however, is interrupt jutsu that are currently being maintained by the caster, and make them unable to cast said jutsu again for 2 posts.
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Shojin Special Jounin
Posts : 488 Join date : 2020-09-27
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| Subject: Re: Gentle Admonishment Tue May 24, 2022 3:30 pm | |
| - Mika wrote:
- Name: Gentle Admonishment
Rank: C Type: Traditional Taijutsu Element: na Description: A sudden strike to the face, breaks concentration for using or maintaining Techniques through the simple application of a sudden unbalancing strike, -2 technique strength, Enemy maintain any Jutsu currently in effect nor reuse any jutsu interrupted by this technique for 2 posts. This technique does not gain this effect against Ninja whose Durability exceeds this jutsu's rank Requirements: Mika Nymphalidae Could you clean this up a bit in terms of grammar? Like this: A sudden strike to the face. If hit, it breaks concentration for techniques currently being maintained through the simple application of a sudden unbalancing strike. -2 technique strength. Jutsu currently being maintained by the enemy are instantly ceased and cannot be reactivated for two posts. This technique does not gain this effect against Ninja whose Durability exceeds this jutsu's rank | |
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Kosuke Jounin
Posts : 463 Join date : 2020-10-13
Character sheet Experience: 40 YEN: 20
| Subject: Re: Gentle Admonishment Wed May 25, 2022 8:37 pm | |
| - Mika wrote:
- Name: Gentle Admonishment
Rank: C Type: Traditional Taijutsu Element: na Description: A sudden strike to the face. If hit, it breaks concentration for techniques currently being maintained through the simple application of a sudden unbalancing strike. -2 technique strength. Jutsu currently being maintained by the enemy are instantly ceased and cannot be reactivated for two posts. This technique does not gain this effect against Ninja whose Durability exceeds this jutsu's rank Requirements: Mika Nymphalidae Approved | |
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