Hideto Senju [ E-Rank Academy Student | Jinchuuriki ]

Name: Hideto
Nickname: Slug Monster
Age: 9
Gender: Male

Height: 145cm
Weight: 50kg
Appearance: He has white hair which is a little bit of long. He has blue eye colour which gives him a pretty look with the white hair. He has a light skin which is normal since his entire family is light skinned. He is short and also skinny but doesn't really care about it. Something is really special about his body, and these are his hands. His hands are really big for his age, but this is not getting recognize before looking specially in his hands. His skin is very clean although he is getting abused from his Father but this will be explained in the backstory.


Village: Konoha
Character Rank: Academy Student/E
Clan: Hideto
Element: Suiton



Personality: Hideto is a nice guy who likes to spend time with people. He likes to talk with someone and to hear some compliments. He likes to have all the attention around for himself. He is most of the time a nice guy but if someone acts bad towards him it ends. He can turn into a problematic and toxic person if he does not like someone. He is someone who has limits which should not passed. Also, he is protective if someone damages his friends they will pay back. He has also zero tolerance for someone who likes to insult people.
Character History: When the 6-tail got sealed and Konoha got it the Family of Hideto gave birth to him and noticed he won’t have the Mokuton. They were embarrassed so they decided to do whatever it cost to gain the 6 tails, so their son have something special. So, they made the hokage to come to the decision to seal the Tailed Beast inside the newborn which happened fast. After the beast got sealed the real horror began. Everyone voided this one even the senju clan which was supposed to be his family. After being a little bit older he always wanted to play with his cousins, but they always voided him. His uncle and dad were always abusive, but he always still wanted to be nice to them. There were even times when he got locked in a fully dark room in which was used genjutsu to make him even more afraid. His dad was an asshole who only wanted his son to be a monster which will protect and represent their clan, but Hideto was a nice guy and this was for his dad something someone which should be a monster should not be. Well since per weeks he is going to the academy.

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Furkann wrote:

Name: Hideto
Nickname: Slug Monster
Age: 9
Gender: Male

Height: 145cm
Weight: 50kg
Appearance: He has white hair which is a little bit of long. He has blue eye colour which gives him a pretty look with the white hair. He has a light skin which is normal since his entire family is light skined. He is short and also skinny but doesn't really care about it.


Village: Konoha
Character Rank: Academy Student/E
Clan: Hideto
Element: Suiton



Personality: Hideto is a nice guy who likes to spend time with people. He likes to talk with someone and to hear some compliments. He likes to have all the attention around for himself. He is most of the time a nice guy but if someone acts bad towards him it ends. He can turn into a problematic and toxic person if he does not like someone. He is someone who has limits which should not passed. Also, he is protective if someone damages his friends they will pay back. He has also zero tolerance for someone who likes to insult people.
Character History: When the 6-tail got sealed and Konoha got it the Family of Hideto gave birth to him and noticed he won’t have the Mokuton. They were embarrassed so they decided to do whatever it cost to gain the 6 tails, so their son have something special. So, they made the hokage to come to the decision to seal the Tailed Beast inside the newborn which happened fast. After the beast got sealed the real horror began. Everyone voided this one even the senju clan which was supposed to be his family. After being a little bit older he always wanted to play with his cousins, but they always voided him. His uncle and dad were always abusive, but he always still wanted to be nice to them. There were even times when he got locked in a fully dark room in which was used genjutsu to make him even more afraid. His dad was an asshole who only wanted his son to be a monster which will protect and represent their clan, but Hideto was a nice guy and this was for his dad something someone which should be a monster should not be. Well since per weeks he is going to the academy.

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Other than that: Keep going with how you're explaining appearance, because so far, it's good.  Same with personality.  For your history, there is nothing innately bad about it, but could you expand on why everyone became so hostile toward Hideto?  It seems they lobbied to get a Jinchuuriki in their clan and then hated him for it.  Did something happen?  For Naruto, it was because the nine-tails nearly destroyed the Leaf.  For Gaara, it was because he killed a bunch of people.

Furkann wrote:

Name: Hideto
Nickname: Slug Monster
Age: 9
Gender: Male

Height: 145cm
Weight: 50kg
Appearance: He has white hair which is a little bit of long. He has blue eye colour which gives him a pretty look with the white hair. He has a light skin which is normal since his entire family is light skinned. He is short and also skinny but doesn't really care about it. Something is really special about his body, and these are his hands. His hands are really big for his age, but this is not getting recognize before looking specially in his hands. His skin is very clean although he is getting abused from his Father but this will be explained in the backstory.


Village: Konoha
Character Rank: Academy Student/E
Clan: Hideto
Element: Suiton



Personality: Hideto is a nice guy who likes to spend time with people. He likes to talk with someone and to hear some compliments. He likes to have all the attention around for himself. He is most of the time a nice guy but if someone acts bad towards him it ends. He can turn into a problematic and toxic person if he does not like someone. He is someone who has limits which should not passed. Also, he is protective if someone damages his friends they will pay back. He has also zero tolerance for someone who likes to insult people.
Character History: When the 6-tail got sealed and Konoha got it the Family of Hideto gave birth to him and noticed he won’t have the Mokuton. They were embarrassed so they decided to do whatever it cost to gain the 6 tails, so their son have something special. So, they made the hokage to come to the decision to seal the Tailed Beast inside the newborn which happened fast. After the beast got sealed the real horror began. Everyone voided this one even the senju clan which was supposed to be his family. After being a little bit older he always wanted to play with his cousins, but they always voided him. His uncle and dad were always abusive, but he always still wanted to be nice to them. There were even times when he got locked in a fully dark room in which was used genjutsu to make him even more afraid. His dad was an asshole who only wanted his son to be a monster which will protect and represent their clan, but Hideto was a nice guy and this was for his dad something someone which should be a monster should not be. Well since per weeks he is going to the academy.

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